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Evan is being delivered to his new alphas, and he's terrified. He puts on a brave face though, knowing that there is nothing he can do but face his situation head on. He'll need to keep his wits about him, and he is determined that he won't give in to his body's natural reaction to meeting an eligible alpha mate. The minute Evan lays eyes on Chad he knows that he's fucked.Evan is being delivered to his new alphas, and he's terrified. He puts on a brave face though, knowing that there is nothing he can do but face his situation head on. He'll need to keep his wits about him, and he is determined that he won't give in to his body's natural reaction to meeting an eligible alpha mate. The minute Evan lays eyes on Chad he knows that he's fucked. The alpha smells delicious, and just seconds after he's opened the door all Evan wants to do is bury his face in the cleft of the supernaturally good looking alpha's pecs. Chad and Peter couldn't be happier with their new omega. They have no intention of treating him poorly, but they know that nothing but time and patience will soothe his fears... (This is a 14,500 word story about two sweet alphas with bodies to die for and their lucky new omega. They are dominant and demanding, but never cruel, and Evan will soon come to realize that all his worry was for naught...) ...

Title : omega part one owned
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ISBN : 24974929
Format Type : Kindle Edition
Number of Pages : 48 Pages
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omega part one owned Reviews

  • Tanu Gill
    2019-05-03 17:00

    It was weird, in the sense that Evan wanted the reassurance that he would be treated as a human being, and when he was immediately latched on (regardless of the heat factor, 'cause the scent neutralizer was there for a purpose), instead of feeling sad about that, he felt calm? That he had gotten into a good place? Huh! What?

  • Prentice
    2019-05-15 01:09

    In many ways, ‘Omega – Part One: Owned’ had all the makings of a five-star start to a fabulous three-part serial. It had an interesting premise, a promising synopsis, and cover art that made me want to look inside. Unfortunately, it didn’t live up to its potential. Beginning with ‘Evan’, a sheltered Omega who has apparently spent the majority of his life in some sort of Center, being ‘delivered’ to his new Alphas’ home, this story started off fairly well even in spite of the typo in the third paragraph. Understandably apprehensive but determined to be brave in the face of the unknown, I was really rooting for Evan. Despite his age and general naiveté, he didn’t necessarily seem to pushover even with his Omega nature working against him.Which it did, almost immediately, upon seeing one of his two new Alphas, Chad. Excitable and eager, Chad didn’t automatically endear himself to me. Neither, for that matter, did the other Alpha, Peter, who was Chad’s opposite and the “dominate” Alpha of the relationship. Here’s why: almost from the start, we’re told that Peter procured Evan to please Chad – okay, that went along with the storyline, but the author could really make it work. Only, Heart didn’t. Instead, I felt like Evan was just an extra hole for the Alphas to use because, as we’re told, Chad wasn’t built to take a knot like Evan. This didn’t improve once Peter was introduced to the mix because all his interactions seem geared towards Chad alone, never mind that Evan was there as well. Then there’s Evan, who far from living up to his non-pushover status, basically just rolls over for them both.Normally, I wouldn’t take exception to the last part; it’s fairly obvious that Evan’s Omega side overwhelmed him and being this was his first interaction with Alphas, that could explain it. Only, it never improved – it might in the next part (I’ll let you know) – but because he had great sex, everything was excused.I – okay, you know what, I’m all for short stories that focus solely on the sex, which I’ll admit was fairly well done here (better in some ways than I expected but also really lacking thanks to the lack of emotion behind it) but with the synopsis I really thought we were getting a little bit of plot. Just a smidgen, a small taste the could carry us over to the next part. Also, character development, which would have been nice but wasn’t really present yet.Before I am lambasted for only pointing out the negative – I’m really not trying to hate; I loved the premise – I did enjoy bits of it. Typo aside, the first few pages were promising. The writing was fairly solid. Evan seemed sweet, Chad seemed eager, and Peter was the kind of dominant Alpha male I love reading about.Unfortunately, whether due to time constraints, over eagerness, or the simple appeal of quick-money made from serials, the author didn’t give the story or characters time to develop. At least not in this first part and while I’ll continue reading just to see if it improves, I think it’s really a shame. I wanted to love this, honestly, and while I did enjoy parts of it, it wasn’t at all what I was hoping it would be and for the price point alone that's disappointing.That having been said, if you’re looking for a no-frills steamy read with a heavy focus on the steamy, this could be exactly what you’re looking for.

  • Jo * Smut-Dickted *
    2019-05-19 17:05

    This review is for the entire serial - though each book gets it own rating. Initially this did not push any buttons. I dislike books where a character (or two) is advertised one way and ends up another. Evan was a pushover, Peter was a big dick (literally and figuratively), and Chad was just too conflicted to be anything but confused about his identity. All three make a great story - but not the one I was expecting. However, as the serial continues it gets better and better and by the last one I am at a solid 4 stars - do not want to put it down too much - and enjoying the characters sort of growing up into themselves. I still don't like Peter - but I love Chad. Chad finally does come to a place of acceptance and understanding. Evan is true to his nature but has enough spunk (no pun) to be an individual. I am eagerly going on to the next book in the series.

  • Sarabeth
    2019-05-23 18:47

    Ok. Are they shifters or not? That's the thing that never gets explained.They have alphas, betas and omegas. They go into heat. They knot. But they don't shift, or change, so it's a bit weird.Still, that's unique, so I gotta hand it to them. Also the world building is interesting. Sex is really on spot. Plot is non existent. For what it is, it does well.

  • Lila Hunter
    2019-04-30 18:09

    3.5 out of 5An interesting start to a series.As many Alpha & Omega story the explanation behind their relationship is minimal, but their interactions compensated for it. It has smexy times, plus a side of D/s in a menage relationship. Looking forward to the next book in the series.

  • Trisha
    2019-05-15 16:54

    Very interesting storyHave enjoyed learning about Evan and his hot alphas Peter and Chad. Peter is the top alpha with Chad being the excited younger version. Looking forward to more of their story.

  • Carlos Quinones
    2019-04-25 00:11

    Well written but....Well it's well written, very descriptive but barely a story on it. If you like smoking sex scenes you'll enjoy this...

  • Emily
    2019-05-19 23:50

    Not my thing at all.

  • B
    2019-05-23 18:03

    Very, very hot alphas and Omega story .

  • Shelley Chastagner
    2019-05-03 23:06

    I found the premise of this book interesting enough that I was actually willing to purchase the rest of the serial. The author now has the complete seven part set available for a better price. There are elements of the story that are familiar, but it is it's own world. The population is made up of Alphas, Betas and Omegas. The anatomy of men is a bit different. The author does a fantastic job of keeping the story line moving and the characters grow from their experiences. I really enjoyed getting to know Peter, Chad and Evan. Each contributed something crucial to the story. Peter's evolution from his own self importance to really listening to Chad and Evan, placing their needs above his own or his company's need was great. I would've liked to have seen his bullying dealt with a bit more distinctly, but I was mostly satisfied with him by the conclusion. I liked Chad from the beginning and didn't understand his willingness to put up with Peter's brutish behavior. I loved it when he finally takes a stand. Evan is sweet and caring. His enthusiasm for his new life is wonderful. I would love to see these three again in the future.I would encourage the author to go through and re-edit. Along with usual word errors and spelling mistakes, the voice tenses change throughout the book and it kept dragging me out of the story. Very annoying. Adult read

  • Renee Henshaw
    2019-05-06 21:58

    I really enjoyed this short but sweet part 1. There are some frustrating editing issues (thus the reason why it only got 4 stars). Told from the POV of all the main characters, you are not left wondering about how they are feeling. I love, love a good knot book, I hope the next part will include a pregnancy too. The sex is hot and I am looking forward to the next one.

  • Ashley
    2019-05-12 22:00

    This was a interesting take on a M/M/M story. I wish that there had been a little more world building in order to understand what was fully going on in the story, but overall it was a quick easy read that was enjoyable. Since it was only the first part of the story, I hope that the following parts have more background information but continue to develop the characters.

  • Centoria Coffil
    2019-05-10 21:04

    (3/27/15) I'm not quite sure how I feel about the book...(3/29/15) Now with a better understanding of the book and its characters I am turning looks forward to continuing this journey a with Peter, Chad, and Evan.

  • Mj
    2019-05-13 17:14

    PWP, but highly enjoyable

  • Tamela
    2019-05-12 16:57

    Sexy little story about a sweet Omega and his two hot Alphas.

  • Caroline Brand
    2019-04-28 22:54

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  • Kelly
    2019-05-17 19:02

    This book is intense with sexual tension from the start. Evan is overwhelmed, but more than ready to be claimed.Missing one star for having this story in small parts.

  • Lisa
    2019-05-21 00:50

    DNF

  • Kattz
    2019-05-13 18:54

    This story line is good. The characters are being developed well for a beginning of a serial. There is no violence and some graphic sexual content.

  • Wolf
    2019-05-10 16:56

    The quality was as expected, this "serie" is basically one book that is published in multiple "books" to make more money and the overal quality on the book confirms this.